One of Jakarta's Biggest Problem

 Problem and Solution Essay

1. Introduction

            Jakarta is the capital city of Indonesia. Jakarta has the biggest number of human population. According to a survey, in Indonesia Jakarta is in the first place and in the world Jakarta is in the second place.Total population in Jakarta 9.992.842 people.

      2. Writing about Problems:

•  How many problems are discussed ?

           One main problem that leads to other problems.

• What are they ?

           Jakarta's annual problem : flood. Flood would make another problems, such as diseases, traffic jam, inhibited daily activities, etc.

• What expressions are used to introduce the problems ?

           One of Jakarta's biggest problem is annual flood...
           The annual floods in Jakarta will cause another problems...

•  How are the problems illustrated further ?

           Every year,  Jakarta always had floods...
           There are so many problems that... 

• What results are discussed for each problem ?

          Every year in rainy season, Jakarta always experiencing floods. The annual flood in Jakarta caused by some problems among others land of Jakarta lacks of water absorption, people littering, land subsidence, and lost of mangrove forests, and high waves in the waters of Jakarta and the high tide that occurred simultaneously with the rain making increasingly besieged in Jakarta's water.
  
      3. Writing about Solutions

• How many solutions are given ?  

           Five solutions.

• What are they ?

1. Prohibit strictly for not littering. 
2. Clean up the rivers.
3. Reforestation

• What three different groups of people does the writer say are responsible for these solutions ? 

1. Citizen
2. Government
3. Businessman

• How would the solutions be implemented ?

1. The government should make regulation for not littering.
2. Reforestation must carried out at Jakarta's center areas.
3. Government need to clean up the rivers.

• What modal verb structures are used to make the suggestions ?

1. Should
2. Must
3. Need to 

      4. Conclusion
    Jakarta's problem should be taken care of all people in Jakarta including the government and citizen.

One of Jakartas's Biggest Problem : The Annual Flood

        Jakarta is the capital city of Indonesia. Jakarta has the biggest number of human population. According to a survey, in Indonesia Jakarta is in the first place and in the world Jakarta is in the second place. Total population in Jakarta 9.992.842 people. Jakarta is a metropolitan city which has same level with province, headed by a governor. Therefore Jakarta has the biggest population in Indonesia, then there must be a lot of place for them to live. People could see in Jakarta almost no vacant land. Because of that Jakarta's land lacks of water absorption. One of Jakarta's problem is the annual flood, one of the causes is Jakarta's land lacks of water absorption.

        One of Jakarta's biggest problem is annual flood.  Every year,  Jakarta always had floods that would being happen in rainy season. There are somen reasons that cause annual flood among others land of Jakarta lacks of water absorption, people littering, land subsidence, and lost of mangrove forests, and high waves in the waters of Jakarta and the high tide that occurred simultaneously with the rain making increasingly besieged in Jakarta's water. The annual floods in Jakarta will cause another problems. The problems are diseases, traffic jam, inhibited daily activities, some people would lost their homes and family members, and they would suffer loss. There are so many problems that would be happen if this disaster is not immediately addressed by all of people.

        There are some solutions that might help to resolve the annual floods in Jakarta. First, the government should make regulations for not littering. These regulations must be run in earnest even the leaders must do these regulations. Second, the government need to clean up the rivers. Considering that rivers in Jakarta are so dirty, full of trash that make not going flow of water in rivers. When the rainy season is come, water in the river would overflow into the streets and causes floods. Third, reforestation must carried out in Jakarta's center area. This solution is not only for the government but also for the citizen, for example the government plants trees in city parks, sidewalks and other public places area and for the citizen, they can plant the trees in their yards.
      
        Jakarta's problem should be taken care of all people in Jakarta including the government and citizen. This problem is not only the responsibility of the government but all of people should take a part to resolve the problem. All of us should have an awareness to keep our environment clean.

      

        

 

         

      

       
 

 

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Clara Gerda A Talented Girl

Paragraph 1 : What this person is doing today ?
Topic sentence : Clara Gerda is one of the best dancer in my high school.
Facts or Examples : 1.   She was chosen as a member of SJC.
                                 2.   She took a part of some dancing competitions.

Paragraph 2 : the road to success
Topic sentence : She tries to dance all the times.
Facts or Examples : 1.  She has been falling in love with dance since she was child.
                                 2.  She practised dancing with passion.
                                 3.  She wants to make her dreams come true.

Paragraph 3 : two characteristics that led to success
Topic sentence : She never gives up.
Facts or Examples : 1.  She never feels down when she failed in a competition.
                                 2.  She has a good body that supports her every movement.

Clara Gerda A Talented Girl

           Clara Gerda is one of the best dancer in my high school. There are two dancing groups in my high school. The first one is SJC (Saint Joseph Crew) and the second one is NBC (New Born Crew). Gerda was chosen as a member of SJC. Since the first time she has joined SJC, she already took a part of some dancing competitions with them. SJC always brings satisfactory results when they following a competition.
          She has been falling in love with dance since she was a child. When we were in high school we lived in dormitory and she became my roommate. I always looked at her when she was dancing in front of mirror. She tries to dance all the times especially when she wants to follow a competition. She practised dancing with passion. She will try to achieve what she had dreamed.
          She never gives up. When she failed in a competition, she never gives up. She will introspection herself and try to find something wrong thereafter she will make efforts to be better. She has a good body that supports every movement of her body. She is not only talented in dancing however she has ideal body for dancing.

A Good Future Doctor

I have a friend named Angela. I think she would be a good doctor. She likes to help each other, good in science and mathematics, also she has desire to develop the level of health in Papua.

First of all, Angela likes to help each other especially people who live in isolated area. If in her school holiday she always joins social charity in her hometown which is held by Church. She didn't know many things about medical so she just helped her mother to check blood type of the children. Because of that habit, she interested in taking medical major at university.

The second is, when she was in senior high school she had good scores especially in science. She always studied hard to understand the material. Moreover she thinks that it is better to understand the material first rather than to get good score.

Last but not least, she has a dream to improve the level of health in Papua because Papua is still on the lowest level of health. After she graduates from university she wants to dedicate herself for society in Papua.
I hope she will reach her dream in the future be a successful doctor.