I have a friend named Angela. I think she would be a good doctor. She likes to help each other, good in science and mathematics, also she has desire to develop the level of health in Papua.
First of all, Angela likes to help each other especially people who live in isolated area. If in her school holiday she always joins social charity in her hometown which is held by Church. She didn't know many things about medical so she just helped her mother to check blood type of the children. Because of that habit, she interested in taking medical major at university.
The second is, when she was in senior high school she had good scores especially in science. She always studied hard to understand the material. Moreover she thinks that it is better to understand the material first rather than to get good score.
Last but not least, she has a dream to improve the level of health in Papua because Papua is still on the lowest level of health. After she graduates from university she wants to dedicate herself for society in Papua.
I hope she will reach her dream in the future be a successful doctor.

it is a really precious dream Angela! i hope you(Yulia) and Angela can reach all of your dreams especially in improving every side of life in Papua👌
ReplyDeleteYour dream is great.hope you can realize your dream
ReplyDeleteHi Yulia!
ReplyDeleteThat's good paragraph, your story so interesting. Your friend have a glorious dream.
Wow your blog inspire me more. Keep writing
ReplyDeleteWow your blog inspire me more. Keep writing
ReplyDeleteWow I will became a big fans of Angela
ReplyDeleteHi Yulia
ReplyDeleteit's a nice paragraph. she would be a future doctor.:)
Hai yulia, it's amazing paragraph.I like fisrt paragraph because like to help each other.
ReplyDeleteGood job!!☺
your friend is a very positive person
ReplyDeleteit will be a suitable job for her in the future.
btw you may recheck some of your words like " also she has desire to develop the level of health in Papua" better if you change it to be " she also has desire to develop the health quality in Papua"
then it will be a gorgeous paragraph
keep writing girl ;)
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Nice paragraph yulia! Angela is so kind. You're so lucky to have a friend like her. Angela will be a good doctor.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing!
Hi yulia, your blog is really nice. It's really good to have a motivated friend like angela, hopefully she will become a great doctor ever. Especially she had a desire to improve papua.
ReplyDeleteBtw if i'm not mistaken, you might want to check your words like "she interested in taking... " become "she has an interested in taking..."
And it's good to have your owb blog like this, keep writing. I will wait for another blog. You already do a great job girl...
Hi yulia, your blog is really nice. It's really good to have a motivated friend like angela, hopefully she will become a great doctor ever. Especially she had a desire to improve papua.
ReplyDeleteBtw if i'm not mistaken, you might want to check your words like "she interested in taking... " become "she has an interested in taking..."
And it's good to have your owb blog like this, keep writing. I will wait for another blog. You already do a great job girl...
wow.. you are so lucky to have a friend like her..you both should come back to Papua, and make it to a better province
ReplyDeleteNice article. Your friend is very kind and so inspiring.
ReplyDeletekeep it up!