Clara Gerda A Talented Girl

Paragraph 1 : What this person is doing today ?
Topic sentence : Clara Gerda is one of the best dancer in my high school.
Facts or Examples : 1.   She was chosen as a member of SJC.
                                 2.   She took a part of some dancing competitions.

Paragraph 2 : the road to success
Topic sentence : She tries to dance all the times.
Facts or Examples : 1.  She has been falling in love with dance since she was child.
                                 2.  She practised dancing with passion.
                                 3.  She wants to make her dreams come true.

Paragraph 3 : two characteristics that led to success
Topic sentence : She never gives up.
Facts or Examples : 1.  She never feels down when she failed in a competition.
                                 2.  She has a good body that supports her every movement.

Clara Gerda A Talented Girl

           Clara Gerda is one of the best dancer in my high school. There are two dancing groups in my high school. The first one is SJC (Saint Joseph Crew) and the second one is NBC (New Born Crew). Gerda was chosen as a member of SJC. Since the first time she has joined SJC, she already took a part of some dancing competitions with them. SJC always brings satisfactory results when they following a competition.
          She has been falling in love with dance since she was a child. When we were in high school we lived in dormitory and she became my roommate. I always looked at her when she was dancing in front of mirror. She tries to dance all the times especially when she wants to follow a competition. She practised dancing with passion. She will try to achieve what she had dreamed.
          She never gives up. When she failed in a competition, she never gives up. She will introspection herself and try to find something wrong thereafter she will make efforts to be better. She has a good body that supports every movement of her body. She is not only talented in dancing however she has ideal body for dancing.