Thesis : Lecturers are not responsible for motivating students to learn.
First Argument : College students are different with high school students.
Second Argument : Motivation is not only from lecturers.
Third Argument : College life is to prepare work life.
Counter Argument : Lecturers are the one who give knowledge to students it means they are the one who have big role in a class.
Conclusion : Motivate students are not lecturers' responsibility but lecturers could motivate students to learn.
Have you felt that lecturers did not give you motivate in your college life ? What do you think about lecturers who give you motivate ? Do you find that motivation from lecturers is helpful enough ? I do believe that Lecturers are not responsible fot motivating students to learn. This thesis means that lecturer do not have responsibility for motivating students in university. However, they can do motivate students to learn.
College student is different with high school students. College student is mature enough to control him/herself. The average age of students in university are above 17th. At that age usually people are mature enough to manage theirself in spite of we can't judge someone by their age to know about their character. In high school every knowledge we got from teachers because every day teacher should teach in front of us in a class, but in college not every single knowledge we got from lecturers because some lecturer just gives the topic and then we have to search the explanation by ourself.
Motivation is not only from lecturer. Since college students are mature enough to manage theirself likewise to find motivate for them. Actually the main motivation is from ourself however we still need another people to strengthen the motivation. As an example parents can be our motivation to achieve our goals in college or someone special like boyfriend or girlfriend it can be more motivate us while we are studying.
College life as a training to the real work life. Does in a work life still have someone like lecturer who give you a motivation ? I'm pretty sure that there is no boss who wants to motivate their subordinate. Even though there must be a boss who wants to motivate their subordinate but they will feel unhappy with it.
Lecturers are the one who give knowledge to students it means they are the one who have big role in a class. Some people said that the lecturers have a big role in class, learning process in a class depends on the lecturer. They would have big spirit in learning if the lecturer gives motivation to the students.
Motivate students are not lecturers' responsibility but lecturers could motivate students to learn. There is no prohibiton that the lecturers can not motivation the students to learn. I do believe that students also need motivation from the lecturers. However motivation isn't only comes from the lecturer and that's not lecturers' responsibility.
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ReplyDeleteA good article and I do enjoy to read it. But I have suggestion for you. You can more pay attention for the first sentence in the first paragraph,may you can change "give" to "gave". Thank youuu
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here my suggestion don't forget to use In conclusion in the last paragraph
Hi yulia. That's a good article. Your writing skill is getting better. I think there are some grammar that aren't correct.
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You explained your opinion so very well. Everything is in order and I can easily understand what you meant.
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ReplyDeleteThat's a good article and easily to understand for me. yYou connect your paragraph very well.I think you need to check your grammar especially in the second paragraph because I found some grammar errors. It would better if you change "that lecturer do not " to be"that lecturer does not ". Thank you
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your vocabulary and grammar also
I like the article because I can easly know the main idea from each paragraph
btw, I find the error word such as "theirself" should be " their self" because the word "theirself" is not in our dictionary
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Hi, Yulia. It is a good article. You state your idea clearly enough and connect every sentences to become one and it makes me easier to understand what you have stated there. Maybe I just want to correct a little mistake,
ReplyDelete"What do you think about lecturers who give you motivate ?" should be "What do you think about lecturers who give you motivation ?" or if you insist and still want to use the word "motivate" maybe you can change it to this "What do you think about lecturers who motivate you ?"
Thank you.
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ReplyDeletei thing i agree with your article, and i like how you wrote your article and sentence.
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